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The Jupiter Theft

Fun premise.

Found the descriptive passages a little boring and hard to follow. How to describe otherworldly space and layouts in a simpler way?

Deus ex machina at the end disappointing - their departure time just happened to come moments before they stopped our heroes?

Descriptions of characters date the writing.